Dorothy has had a long, magical life. Fleeing
persecution, death and betrayal, she and her aunt sought their own sanctuary, a
place of their own with their own people sheltered by magic. But even that was
a tragedy, leaving Dorothy alone with her immortal followers – followers who
worshipped her and adored her and the gifts she brought, but couldn’t fill the
hollow within herself.
Until one man came who brought love – and brought tragedy
to her people. Now she must resort to luring in others to her lethal trap to
try and save some of her people from the monster she invited among them. Which
is where Brooke, Natalie and Angel arrive in this isolate sanctuary and find
themselves drawn into the web.
This book opened awesomely. We had Dorothy and her story,
her history. We had her power, her childhood, the persecution and trials she
faced. We had her developing her power, we had her aunt and her own
awesomeness. We had them challenging the norms and motives and evil prejudices
of the era in which they lived. We had them escaping it while condemning it, we
had them setting up their own community, and their lives there. The magic, the
carousel, the heartbreaking split between them.
It was fascinating. It was powerful. It was meaningful.
It was evocative and poetic and painful and beautiful. I was hooked, this book
looked awesome. I couldn’t wait for more information about Dorothy, more of
Dorothy’s story, her struggle to ensure her community survived and thrived, the
challenges hinted at with the man and his hunger, the oddness unveiled with the
boy and his spiders. I knew I was going to love this book.
That was Part One of the book. Truly excellent
characters, an amazing story, a fascinating world, a great concept and a
beautiful, emotive, poetic style that was a sheer joy to read.
Then we reached Part Two.
Dorothy became an odd, plotting, side character trying to
run some kind of convoluted plan that I never really understood but involved
stuff happening. Instead we focused on Brooke, her daughter Natalie and her new
husband Angel. A family of three
arriving in town to wander around for convoluted reasons and promptly info-dump
the hell out of everything. Page after page after page after page I was given
more information about Brooke and Angel’s childhoods than I know about my own
parents’. Brooke’s first marriage was covered including why she dumped Natalie’s
father and why she is so protective and controlling and various others things
covered. At length. Angel’s father, stepfather and how that contributed to
various issues in his own life and romantic life. His love of carousels was
described in eyeball-desiccating detail. We have descriptions of their jobs,
why they do their jobs, what they think of their jobs. I’m scrolling through my
tablet notes as I write this review and it’s just dozens of highlights with the
notes “long winded” “unnecessary information” repeated over and over again. I
can track my growing frustration as the notes change to “rambling” “yet more
rambling” “why are you telling me this?”, “am I bothered?” and “ye gods who
cares?!”
All of this is written in the most rambly, overdescriptive, style that is supposed to be ominous or evocative but fails utterly because it is so convoluted and so constantly interrupted with the massive info-dumps. In trying to make me care about these three people, the author forces a huge amount of information about them, shoe-horned in without rhyme or reason and in the driest, dullest style possible. Unlike Dorothy who had me invested as her story was SHOWN in dramatic, poetic, amazing detail, this dull recounting forced in every time a character stood still for two seconds didn’t just leave me not caring about these characters, it left me actively hoping something would kill and eat them so we could move onto something more interesting. The endless description is so clunky and unnatural that they feel LESS like actual people than if the info had been left out.
