This book is one of the more original concepts I’ve come
across in a long time. Demons in hell who have escaped their bondage in all
their myriad forms and seek to corrupt and control humanity, feeding on their
sin. The Fallen, angels that fell but sought forgiveness being tasked with
defeating these demons and protecting humanity. And these Fallen come in so
many forms – different kinds of fae, vampires, werewolves, even things like
harpies and griffins. There’s immense diversity there. And then the hellhounds,
created expressly to bring down the demons and level the playing field. It’s an
amazingly rich world
Kas, as a young hellhound is an interesting character. I
won’t say she’s unique in anyway, but she has some conflicts, not least of
which is her frustration that she and hers must sacrifice themselves for
humanity that seems driven to pursue self-destruction – and the unfairness of
her being punished for what her ancestors did.
The story itself follows an incredibly interesting path
with many different twists and turns, each unveiling and entirely new chapter,
a new section of the world, and following Kasadya’s path from neophyte to formidable
warrior in a world that is rapidly changing.
Unfortunately, despite all this good potential, the book
fell very flat for me for me.
Firstly, this felt like several books rolled into one,
like a series was compressed. We begin with a typical YA school setting; Kas
has gone to supernatural school, she doesn’t like it, she’s bitter about her
parents, there are mean girls, her teacher is mean but she’s
oh-so-special-and-good.
Then we move and there’s a new threat (demons in… clubs?) and they need to train for that… but then we move again and she’s now growing and changing as a gladiator… then we move again and she’s training and fighting with a human team… then we move again.
Too many stories and none of them were developed as much
as they could have been. They felt shallow and not properly built upon, almost
like the author starts writing a story then suddenly switches to a different
one, then suddenly she gets bored of that and moves to another one entirely. They’d have been better served stretched out
over 3 books to have greater impact, development and world building.
The second major problem is the main character’s voice.
She starts as a whiny teenager, stropping and tantrumming around, drowning in
angst and OMG IT’S NOT FAIR that makes her intensely unlikeable. It doesn’t
help that the dialogue is, in general, pretty stilted and not very natural. And
then after 2 years in the gladiator pits… she’s the same person! She’s more
dangerous and lethal but her voice is the same and nothing ruins taking a level
in badass like a character suddenly declaring “OMG!” Not “Oh My God”, literally
“OMG”. Even Buffy would have a hard job passing that off as cool and dangerous
snark. The only real growth we get out of her is a level of cockiness and a
need to stare everyone down.
The story just ends up filled with loose ends and random
inserts that never develop into anything because the story keeps changing. She
makes friends at school, who then disappear. We have some obligatory Mean
Girls, because every school must have Mean Girls who hate the protagonist on
sight, but only one remains relevant and her animosity is still baseless. We
have a love interest – who ceases to become relevant almost as soon as he’s
introduced, and then a love triangle that does likewise and then the brother of
one of the love triangle members which, again, doesn’t maintain relevance. The
story changes so quickly and so shallowly that I can’t follow or becoming
invested in any of these storylines in any major way.
