Devon is, in so many ways, a normal Australian teenager,
like so many other teens
Until he runs into Renee in a nightclub and learns
something awesome – and terrifying – about himself
He is a mage: a being of incredible potential power. But
there are few things more corrupting than power.
The core of this book is that Devon is, ultimately, an
ordinary person. He’s an ordinary teenager who discovers something surprising
has happened to him. That’s the defining feature of how this book is laid out,
starting from its very ominous beginning where we clearly expect something very
unordinary and pretty horrifying to happen. This book is the origin story. This
is where the vaguely mentioned ominous things find their beginning
This is where we have the ordinary man begin to become
something so much more
So the very ordinariness of the book is the point. Devon
is a teenager, an 18 year old with very 18 year old problems.
He has friends who aren’t always good people but who he
cares about. He has romantic issues with Tina and lots of fumbling awkwardness.
He’s not academically gifted and school is both a struggle and a trial. He has
clashes with teachers but, unlike so many other narratives, it’s quickly clear
that his teachers do actually care and aren’t just terribad awful people he has
to navigate around. He has some concerns about the future but is largely ignoring
it even as other people try to get him to take it more seriously. It’s a very
normal reaction – he’s a kid trying to avoid hard questions he has no answers
to.
He has a lot of very real world problems and it is
excellently portrayed.
The problem is… I don’t really care.
And I feel kind of bad for saying that because it’s
really well written and it feels so excellently and realistically portrayed. I
really get the strong feeling of Devon as a teenager, a very ordinary teenager
as well. I’m just really not interested – and that’s entirely a personal taste
thing. I don’t really care about Devon and Tina or Devon’s school work, or
Devon getting through school or Devon’s plans for the future or Devon’s friends
or Devon’s family or Devon’s normal life. Even his interactions with magic and
his friends seemed really drawn out. There was a scene with him playing pool
with Tony and being sharked which seemed to go on for endless pages
I really feel kind of shallow for saying it, but I really
don’t.
I do really like his interactions with Renee. I love the
world building that goes into learning about mana. I love the development of
it. I love the interactions and fun between Devon and Renee. I love how
learning about mana changes Devon, I like how he wonders and worries about what
he is becoming and is able to do. I like how it changes how he views things, I
like how previously threatening people become so mundane to him because he has
so much power. I like how he loses the thrill of extreme sports because he’s so
powerful now there’s no threat any more. I love how you can see the seeds of
this changing him as a person. I love how magic is portrayed, how it both has a
coherent system but also how it is very different from how I’ve seen it before.
I like how, just seeing how magic works and affects people, we can clearly see
how it can lead to a mage’s corruption and inhumanity. I like how we can see
the trap clearly without it being spelled out too simplistically to hit us over
the head with it. It’s a nifty system with a terrible snare built into it.
And it’s because this is the core of the book, the
beginnings of seeing how Devon is changing as a person, becoming slightly
inhuman in his thoughts – contrasted with Vin a late appearing antagonist who
seems to continue these threads – that we really need to stress the normality
of Devon’s life. Without the normality of Devon clearly spelled out, his slow
shift into something truly not normal – and the menacing threat of what he
could become has a real chance of being lost. All the action and fun and
introspection needs that normal base
But it doesn’t change that I didn’t find the normal base
particularly intriguing or compelling. Maybe it’s because the introduction was
such an excellent, ominous lead in, but I just didn’t. Not for any fault of the
writing or portrayal or anything similar – just, I think, from my own taste, my
own preference for the mystical and magical and generally finding the mundane
dull.
We do have some major female characters, particularly
Renee who is an interesting mentor/ally/love interest/friend to Devon. There’s
a long history in fiction of male protagonists getting a female mentor to teach
them to be awesome protags – even though the woman could definitely be a better
protagonist herself. I feared we’d see the same here – but despite his talent,
Devon never surpasses Renee and she has her own storylines and involvement –
perhaps even being more closely involved in the plot than him
There are virtually no racial minorities – I counted one
tiny mention of an Asian teacher. There are no LGBTQ characters – but homophobia
is used by some rather tiresome bullies: using homophobia as a plot point while
not including any actual LGBTQ people is an annoying habit which really needs
to end
I think I leave this book feeling it was decent as a
stand alone novel – but has vast potential as an origin story for much much
more. Looking at it from that angle, I am definitely eager for the second book
and consider the normality that isn’t to my taste to be an essential part of
that eagerness and foreshadowing
