Ruby the new Dyre of North America, has been kidnapped –
and only Des and Thierry, the people who love her, can try and get her back
She’s been taken to Europe, and must choose between a
possible escape from the legacy she never asked for – or loyalty to the new
family and people she has found.
I do feel like this book pulled out of a lot of woo-woo
all of a sudden without a whole lot of weight or depth behind it. And since
that woo-woo was convenient for the plot it felt a little flat to me. Like “how
will I find Ruby?!” “Oh I’m psychic now! That’s conveniently useful!”
No, it’s not that convolutedly written, not at all. But
it doesn’t change the convenience of it – a convenience that is often repeated.
The characters don’t know what to do? That’s ok, a dead person is going to
haunt them and give them step by step instructions on how to solve this problem.
And it works. It also introduces more supernatural woo-woo that everyone just
kind of swallows and it all works wonderfully with minimal difficulties. It’s
just so easy. It just has all the answers spoon-fed to them by some convenient
woo-woo
This is exacerbated by them not even exploring the
supernatural woo-woo being handed to them. Like the idea that geas-bound have
woo-woo… ok can we explore that? Why? What goes into the process? Where does
the power come from? What’s the history here? Or the fact that every time Des
has a vision she also bleeds from her ears and nose! Every time she has a
vision she has a cranial bleed! She is literally having grand mal seizures, she
is having strokes. She is literally asking people to punch her unconscious to
help Rose through visions! What Urban Fantasy or Paranormal Romance book doesn’t
LEAP on the angst potential of this! She’s risking death and brain damage for
the sake of the woman she loves! Where’s the angst? Where’s the wailing? Where’s
the guilt and martyrdom and nobility and overwrought emotions?! How can this
just be a thing? Or there’s the supernatural afterlife that is revealed. How
can the tangible proof of their afterlife not be powerful and world changing
and immense?

