Sarita, the Water Amazon, is often considered the weakest
of the four and certainly the least likely to be sent out on a mission alone.
So she’s surprised when Ganga insists she goes on a mission that would normally
be Becca’s field of expertise.
That’s not the first surprise – from falling into the
hands of Ian who has been plaguing her dreams for weeks, but has his own plans
to her – to then actually falling in love in the most unlikely circumstances,
things change very quickly for her.
But they need to change – including her powers – as Helen
advances her plots and becomes ever closer to destroying the Amazons – and the
world with them.
Putting the romance to one side, there’s a lot to say
about story and character development in this book.
This feels like the last book in the series and would be
appropriate as such since each Amazon has had a book of her own. The book was
perfectly written to close their ongoing story arc, deal with the big bad and
end in a grand epic conflict. All the Amazons have their HEA, and the future is
decided. It’s closed neatly and nicely with no unresolved threads. At the same
time we have a careful nudging of that door ajar should future stories in the
same world happen – along with cameo or even full appearances of the Amazons
and their families. There’s a couple of storylines that could be pursued but
don’t need to be –it’s a nice way to wrap up a series while still leaving the
option of picking it up again.
The story also had a wonderful sense of epic. The
consequences of failure were grand, emotional and extremely clear, the menace
was well maintained and the fight scenes were action packed, excellently
written and great fun
I also liked a lot of the character development. The
goddesses have frequently been presented as vain, fickle, egotistical, petty,
selfish and generally unpleasant and incapable of getting anything done. All of
this is true. But this book also underscores that they do care – in their
self-absorbed way – they care about humanity or they wouldn’t have created the Amazons
at all. We have this displayed wonderfully and it adds some great depth to the
four goddesses – and even Frejyr.
Sarita also grew well, going from a woman plagued by her
insecurities about her scar and being the weakest Amazon to growing in her
power and confidence, determined to be treated as an equal and be firmly
respected by everyone, resisting any attempts to infantilise her. It was good
to see – but unfortunately the whole “Volatile” element meant Sarita had a lot
of temper tantrums storming out of the room. Even when they were justified,
they were childish and not the way I would have expected her to resolve her
issues, especially since we’ve seen no sign of it to date. But often her
sisters had a point and their input should have been respected. It was
annoying.
I do like that Sarita’s power growth was pushed by
goodness. Sheer, pure hearted, goodness. I know that sounds twee, but it’s nice
to see a character who is empowered through tweeness rather than being super
dangerous or the child of a god or other source of immense power – Sarita is
powerful because she is just such a good person. Good enough to use dark magic
without being corrupted. Good enough to become the very opposite of a dark
practitioner.
Those are the good. The bad is that I just didn’t get the
story. Parts of it were unbelievable, parts of it didn’t make sense and parts
of it were too damn vague.



